Stuart - admires the monochrome colour palette but enjoyed the introduction of red and blue with flags

Charley - do you have an idea for the final outcome?

Alice - thinks sketchbook is really strong and really impressed with contextualisation of the work

Alan - it's obvious that you aren't feeling satisfied yet but the way you talk about it and the way it looks all hangs together really well
 - pursuing the video would be helpful and how to present the body of research is something to think about
 - looks like you're spoiled for choice with strong visual development
 - thinks the research led practice suits you really well

Jennie - there's something missing - when you talk about it everything slots into place but how would it be when you aren't there
 - the way you use text and language is all important to the process - this could be described in a pragmatic way in the title or through voice-over
 - interesting the idea of missing information but needs some presence of language (loved your explanation of the heaviness of the graphite)

Are you going to display multiple outcomes together or one final outcome?