Crit 15/12/20 // Feedback

Alice - emphasised the idea of artefacts - could be strong  - the plate being found incomplete in the ground

Abi - likes the found pieces - and the connection between sharp edges of the plate and the edges of the flags - could you combine found objects with the flags?

Alan - Do you either take one strand or try work them together?  The works could be collated into a body of research that is presented in a certain way - as a catalogue?
Flags made him think of semaphore - the hand-held flags.  You on the hill spelling things out in semaphore.
Could propose a flagpole as a site-specific work.
There's links between so many aspects of it.

Jennie - How could this be presented in an exciting way? - could talk to Rachael or Peter Amoor
Would also be interesting to know what I thought about the Collective Gallery, it's significance on the hill/it's presence.
Try looking at historical ways of presenting work like this.
What written information could I provide?  How could I present it?

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